When you were punished by your parents for doing something undesirable, did you have it coming?

2014-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Yes, I was harum-scarum at that time. However, now I become a two children's father. Thus, I can a little understand my parents'mind when they punished me in my youth. My son started to resist me and my wife. And he often fighted with his young sister. He bited her leg sometimes. We punished him with standing in the side of the wall of my living room without moving. He do not know a tolerance and playing together yet. Everytime he is punished, he cried and apealed he had a throat pain. My wift amd me forgive him sine his fake illness is very cute . sooner or later, we hope he get to understand why he is blamed.

강사 첨삭

I didn\'t see this coming Sir Augustine! Thank you for doing this despite your hectic schedule. Your stories are always remarkable!!! And mind you Sir, your writing skills are truly noteworthy. I just provided some recommendations, so they won\'t be misunderstood. Nonetheless, I think I understood you perfectly! Honestly, I have a similar experience. My younger sister and I used to fight when we were still very young. We used to get a series of spanks from our dear father because of that. Good times! Good for Jein, he just stands still at the corner. Thank you for sharing this with me Sir Augustine. Oh, poor Dain. But I know that when she gets older, she will definitely fight back with her naughty brother, so beware Sir. May you continue to have a great day and enjoy your holidays! [I do know that you will.] Stay safe!!! _Klein Yes, I was harum-scarum at that time.>>Correct!However, now I become a two children\'s father. >>However, now I have become a father of two children. Thus, I can a little understand my parents\'mind when they punished me in my youth. >>Thus, I can understand my parents\' mind, a little, when they punished me in my youth. >>Thus, I can understand a little of my parents\' mind when they punished me in my youth. My son started to resist me and my wife. And he often fighted with his young sister. >>My son started to resist me and my wife, and he often fights with his young sister. He bited her leg sometimes. >>He bites her leg sometimes. We punished him with standing in the side of the wall of my living room without moving. >>We punished him by letting him stand at the side of the wall of my living room without moving. He do not know a tolerance and playing together yet. >>He does not know what tolerance is and playing together yet. Everytime he is punished, he cried and apealed he had a throat pain. >>Every time he is punished, he cries and appeals he has sore throat. My wift amd me forgive him sine his fake illness is very cute . >>My wife and I forgive him for his fake illness is very cute. sooner or later, we hope he get to understand why he is blamed. >>Correct

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