When you wew a child, what things were you afraid of?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, I was afraid of going to toilet alone.
So, I always went to toilet with my grandmother.
I make my grandmother stand in front of the toilet door.
Also, I was afraid of night. Because it\'s so dark .
강사 첨삭
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When I was a child, I was afraid of going to toilet alone.
>>When I was a child, I was afraid of going to the toilet alone.
So, I always went to toilet with my grandmother.
>>CORRECT
I make my grandmother stand in front of the toilet door.
>>CORRECT
Also, I was afraid of night. Because it\'s so dark .
>> Also, I was afraid of the night. Because it\'s so dark .
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