Whenever my customer visit my office I treat a lunch at Korean restaurant.
학생이 쓴 원문
> Have you ever toured anyone around your company? When someone visits your company for the first time, what are the customary greetings that you show or do?
Well, near by my office there is no specific place to show my customer.
In my case, Whenever my customer visit my office I treat a lunch at Korean restaurant. I think that many of the Germany doesn\'t know well about Korean food. So I introduce Korean food them. And most of cases It was successful. Many of them are satisfied with Korean food.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this. You can never go wrong with Korean food.
- T. Beth
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Well, near by my office there is no specific place to show my customer.>>> correct
>>> OR: Well, there\'s no specific place near my office to show to my customer.
In my case, Whenever my customer visit my office I treat a lunch at Korean restaurant.
In my case, Whenever my customer visit my office I treat a lunch at Korean restaurant.
>>>In my case, whenever my customer visits my office I treat lunch at a Korean restaurant.
I think that many of the Germany doesn\'t know well about Korean food.
>>> I think that many of the Germans don\'t know well about Korean food.
So I introduce Korean food them.
>>> So I introduce Korean food to them.
And most of cases It was successful.
>>> correct ( And most pf the cases, it was successful.)
>>> OR: And in most cases, they like it.
Many of them are satisfied with Korean food.
>>> correct
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