Whenever you have a problem, who do you usually talk about it with? Who do you ask for advice?
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Hello Kate. Thanks once again for this. It\'s good to have people you can open up with and share your concerns with. Sometimes, having someone to listen is helpful in dealing with problems.
- T. Beth
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I usually talk to my cousin whenever there is a problem.
>>> CORRECT.
He is one year older than me.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: He is a year older than I am.
He is a good listener.
>>> CORRECT.
He is very caring.
>>> CORRECT.
But he notice my problems objectively and talk to me coolly.
>>> OR: But he looks into my problems objectively and talks to me in a cool manner.
We have a basic idea, but the way we behave is different, so his advice is very useful to me.
>>> OR: We have similarities in ideas but we behave differently, so his advice is very useful to me.
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