Where are you going after our class?
학생이 쓴 원문
After this class, I continue my work at school as a principal.
Normally in the afternoon, I have meetins with head teachers and parents to decide on the school schedule and main curriculum.
In fact I spend alot of time meeting teachers and parents to listen various opinions.
When I go home, I feel tired.
But I am happy I have a my job.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for your ideas today.
Have a great weekend and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
Where are you going after our class?
After this class, I continue my work at school as a principal.
>>After this class, I will continue my work at the school as a principal.
Normally in the afternoon, I have meetins with head teachers and parents to decide on the school schedule and main curriculum.
>>Normally in the afternoon, I have meetings with the head teachers and parents to decide on the school\'s schedule and the main curriculum.
In fact I spend alot of time meeting teachers and parents to listen various opinions.
>>In fact, I spend a lot of time meeting the teachers and parents to listen to their various opinions.
When I go home, I feel tired.
CORRECT!
or>>When I go home, I am exhausted.
But I am happy I have a my job.>>But I am happy I have a job.
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