Where are you going after our class?
학생이 쓴 원문
After this class, I continue my work at school as a orincipal.
Normally in the afternoon, I have meetings with head teachers decide on the school schedule and main curriculums.
In fact, I spend a lot of meeting teachers and parents to listen various opinions.
When I finish my work, I feel tired.
But I am happy I have a my job.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for today\'s ideas!
Please keep them coming!
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Teacher Elly.
Where are you going after our class?
After this class, I continue my work at school as a orincipal.
>>After this class, I will continue working at the school as the principal.
>>After this class, I will continue working at the school as the principal.
Normally in the afternoon, I have meetings with head teachers decide on the school schedule and main curriculums.
>>Normally, in the afternoon, I have meetings with the head teachers. We will decide on the school\'s schedule and main curriculums.
In fact, I spend a lot of meeting teachers and parents to listen various opinions.
In fact, I spend a lot of meeting teachers and parents to listen various opinions.
>>In fact, I have a lot of meetings with the teachers and the parents. I listen to their various opinions.
When I finish my work, I feel tired.
When I finish my work, I feel tired.
CORRECT!
or>>Whenever I finish working, I often feel tired.
But I am happy I have a my job.
>>But I am happy that I have a job.
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