Where are you going on a trip next time? Why do you want to go there?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go on a trip to USA because I think there a many fun things.
For example, house of the city, nature, delicious food.
강사 첨삭
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Where are you going on a trip next time? Why do you want to go there?
I want to go on a trip to USA because I think there a many fun things.
>> I want to go on a trip to the USA because I think there many fun things there.
For example, house of the city, nature, delicious food.
>> For example, houses or buildings in the city, nature, or delicious food.
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