Where can you find so many rocks?
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The place you can get rocks most is mountainsides, rivers, the ocean, or garden which have soil. Actually you can find rocks almost everywhere.n You can find rocks in space too. The rocks fly around in space, that is. In other plants too, there are rocks. In Mercury, there are rocks too. So you can say that rocks are almost everywhere.
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The place you can get rocks most is mountainsides, rivers, the ocean, or garden which have soil.
>>I think the places where we can get and see most of the rocks are on the mountainsides, rivers, oceans, and gardens.
Actually you can find rocks almost everywhere.n
>>Actually, we can find many rocks everywhere.
You can find rocks in space too.
>>We can even find rocks in outer space, too.
The rocks fly around in space, that is.
>>The rocks fly around in space.
In other plants too, there are rocks.
>>There are rocks on other planets, too.
In Mercury, there are rocks too.
>>For example, on the planet Mercury, we can find rocks there, too.
So you can say that rocks are almost everywhere.
>>Therefore, we can truly say that rocks are found everywhere.
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