Where could the best restaurant in your city be?
학생이 쓴 원문
Best restaurant in my city is to cook spicy Stir-fried Chicken. we said dak-galbi. Our city have a lot of these restaurant. This foods are very famous in our country. This foods is cut chicken and mix red paper sause, onion, garlic etc and grild on the fan. This fan is big and thick. When grild chicken we add some cabbage, sweet potato and rice cake. I like this foods. If i ate this food at other place, l don\'t feel delicious. I think that original foods is the best.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
\"Dak-galbi\" or the spicy stir-fried chicken, is one of my favorite Korean dishes. There are many Korean restaurants here in my city; however, I wonder why these stores do not cook the same way. The restaurant where I bought this dish was so close to my old company office, so it is quite inaccessible for me if I want to buy one.
Thank you for this homework.
Akii~
Best restaurant in my city is to cook spicy Stir-fried Chicken. we said dak-galbi.
>> The best restaurant in my city, in my opinion, serves spicy stir-fried chicken, which we call dak-galbi.
Our city have a lot of these restaurant. This foods are very famous in our country.
>> There are many dak-galbi restaurants here, and this dish is very famous in Korea.
This foods is cut chicken and mix red paper sause, onion, garlic etc and grild on the fan.
>> It\'s made by cutting up chicken and mixing it with red pepper sauce, onions, garlic, and more. Then it\'s grilled on a large, thick pan.
This fan is big and thick. When grild chicken we add some cabbage, sweet potato and rice cake. I like this foods.
>> While it’s cooking, we add cabbage, sweet potato, and rice cakes. I really love this dish.
If I ate this food at other place, l don\'t feel delicious. I think that original foods is the best.
>> When I eat it in other places, it doesn’t taste as good. I think the original version from my city is the best.
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