Where did you spend your first salay

I was got my first salay four years ago, at that time,that was very big money. So I saved money, and made a plan to spend money.First,I bought some present for my family and ate delicious food. Second, I met my friends,and we ate lots of food,then,I paid fees. Finally, I like fruits, so I bought lots of fruits following different kinds, then, ate those fruits. I felt really happy.It was good memories.

Hi [이름], let's check your composition. =p Teacher Connie =p  I was got my first salay four years ago, at that time,that was very big money.  >>Four years ago, I had  my salary and that time, my salary is considered as a big amount of money. So I saved money, and made a plan to spend money. >>So, I saved it and planned where I am going to spend it. First,I bought some present for my family and ate delicious food.  >>First, I bought a present for my family and we ate delicious foods. Second, I met my friends,and we ate lots of food,then,I paid fees. >> Second, I treated my friends for a meal. Finally, I like fruits, so I bought lots of fruits following different kinds, then, ate those fruits.  >>Finally, I bought a lot of fruits because that was my favorite. I felt really happy. >> Correct It was good memories. >> Those were good memories.