Where do most people in your country gather to celebrate the winter solstice Sunday?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, people used to spend their winter solstice with their whole family and eat red been soup.
but now this tradition almost disappear.
so we celebrate winter solstice in my house simply.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy New Year, Buddy!
Finally, I am reading your homework. Haha!
Anyway, be careful on your SPELLING, PUNCTUATION, and CAPITALIZATION when you write sentences.
From Teacher Joylin.
Here are the corrections.
In Korea, people used to spend their winter solstice with their whole family and eat red been soup.
>>> In Korea, people used to spend their winter solstice with their whole family and eat red bean soup. (Check your Spelling )
but now this tradition almost disappear.
>>> But now, this tradition almost disappear.
so we celebrate winter solstice in my house simply.
>>> So, we celebrate the winter solstice in my house simply.
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