Where do you and your friends usually go to?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually go to coffee shop and sometimes library to study or talk with my friends. and I like to go out with someone anywhere. I love to walk around. but, The winter season is around the corner. I really hate to be cold. :)
강사 첨삭
Nice hobby, [이름]! Still, walking is the best exercise. Have a good day!-Faith-
I usually go to coffee shop and sometimes library to study or talk with my friends. >> I usually go to a coffee shop and sometimes to a library to study or talk with my friends.
and I like to go out with someone anywhere. I love to walk around.
>> Also, I like to go out with someone anywhere because I love to walk around.
but, The winter season is around the corner. I really hate to be cold. :)
>> But, the winter season is around the corner and I really hate to feel cold. :)
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