Where do you like to go on vacation?

2022-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gela

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'d like to go water-leisure sports center which is called Ppaji by Koreans. In this place, I will enjoy water-leisure sports like water-ski. I have been to this place, but I didn\'t succeed water-ski. So, I want to try it again. Also, there are various kinds of water-rides in this place. I would like to go on the rides with my family because when I tried the rides before, they were so fun. If my family goes to this place, clearly, we will make memorable memories.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, Kimberly!


Thank you for doing your homework! Your writing just gets better^^

I am happy that you wrote complex sentences. This output is quite advance! Well done!

I have not been to a water-leisure sports center before, but it sounds fun!

I will add this to my bucket list.

See you later in our class^^


~ Teacher Gela



I\'d like to go water-leisure sports center which is called Ppaji by Koreans.

>> I\'d like to go to a water-leisure sports center which is called Ppaji by Koreans.

In this place, I will enjoy water-leisure sports like water-ski.

>>CORRECT

I have been to this place, but I didn\'t succeed water-ski.

>> I have been to this place, but I didn\'t succeed in water skiing.

So, I want to try it again.

>>CORRECT

Also, there are various kinds of water-rides in this place.

>>CORRECT

I would like to go on the rides with my family because when I tried the rides before, they were so fun.

>>CORRECT

If my family goes to this place, clearly, we will make memorable memories.

>>CORRECT

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·