Where do you like to go on vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Kimberly!
Thank you for doing your homework! Your writing just gets better^^
I am happy that you wrote complex sentences. This output is quite advance! Well done!
I have not been to a water-leisure sports center before, but it sounds fun!
I will add this to my bucket list.
See you later in our class^^
~ Teacher Gela
>> I\'d like to go to a water-leisure sports center which is called Ppaji by Koreans.
In this place, I will enjoy water-leisure sports like water-ski.
>>CORRECT
I have been to this place, but I didn\'t succeed water-ski.
>> I have been to this place, but I didn\'t succeed in water skiing.
So, I want to try it again.
>>CORRECT
Also, there are various kinds of water-rides in this place.
>>CORRECT
I would like to go on the rides with my family because when I tried the rides before, they were so fun.
>>CORRECT
If my family goes to this place, clearly, we will make memorable memories.
>>CORRECT
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