Where do you live?
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1. Where do you live?
I live in an apartment. My house is in an apartment complex. There are lots convenient living facilities around the apartment complex.
There is a large mart. many schools, a police office. a public institution in downtown where I live.
2. If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
If I could live somewhere else, That would be the urban area. There are a lot of the general hospital in the city. When we get sick and
hurt, we must go to the hospital where to get treatment quickly and timely. If we are getting old, I thing it is good to live in the city.
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Where do you live?
1. Where do you live?
I live in an apartment.
I live in an apartment.
CORRECT!
or>>I am residing in an apartment.
My house is in an apartment complex.
CORRECT!
or>>My place is located in an apartment complex.
There are lots convenient living facilities around the apartment complex.
CORRECT!
or>>There are many convenient living facilities close to the apartment complex.
There is a large mart. many schools, a police office. a public institution in downtown where I live.
>>There is a large mart, several schools, a police station, and a public institution in the downtown area, where I live.
2. If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
If I could live somewhere else, That would be the urban area.
2. If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
If I could live somewhere else, That would be the urban area.
>>If I could live somewhere else, it would be in the urban area.
There are a lot of the general hospital in the city.
>>There are a lot of general hospitals in the city.
When we get sick and hurt, we must go to the hospital where to get treatment quickly and timely.
>>When we get sick and hurt, we must go to the hospital, where we can get treatment quickly and timely.
If we are getting old, I thing it is good to live in the city.
>>If we get old, I think it is good to live in the city.
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