Where do you live?

2023-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

학생이 쓴 원문

Where do you live? I live in my house in Suwon near Seoul in South Korea. Actually, I don\'t have my own house. so I stayed in my parent\'s house. that makes me a little bit from finance press but I have deep press for that because I need to go outside to make something special for me, making happy to my parents who have peace of mind to me :)

강사 첨삭

Hello, Samuel!


I want to express my gratitude for your diligent response to this question. I appreciate the depth and detail you put into your paragraph. Instead of just mentioning your address, you shared something meaningful about it.

I can certainly relate to your desire to make your parents happy. Seeing our parents smile is a universal wish, isn\'t it? :)

In any case, I hope you\'re having a wonderful time staying in your parents\' house! Stay happy and healthy. See you in our next class.


~ Teacher Maxine



I live in my house in Suwon near Seoul in South Korea.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I live in my house in Suwon, which is near Seoul in South Korea.

Actually, I don\'t have my own house. so I stayed in my parent\'s house.

>> Actually, I don\'t have my own house, so I stay in my parent\'s house.

that makes me a little bit from finance press but I have deep press for that because I need to go outside to make something special for me, making happy to my parents who have peace of mind to me :)

>> [Do you mean]: That puts some financial pressure on me, but I\'m determined to do it because I want to go outside and create something special for myself, bringing happiness to my parents who care about me and have peace of mind. :)

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