Where do you plan to stay when you retire?
학생이 쓴 원문
Where do you plan to stay when you retire?
In the countryside or in the city?
I would like to go to the Phillipines when I retire.
I like to be in the city which is not that busy.
My friends ands I made the plan to stay in the phillines with other
close friedns!
We want to share the last time to be together.
It is not easy but we will try it!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ms. [이름]^^
There\'s no harm in trying.
Actually, many foreign people choose to retire in a tropical country.
You can always come here as long as you want.^^
Have a good day!
T. Leny
Where do you plan to stay when you retire? In the countryside or in the city?I would like to go to the Philippines when I retire.>>> CorrectI like to be in the city which is not that busy.>>> CorrectMy friends and I made the plan to stay in the Philippines with otherclose friends!>>> CorrectWe want to share the last time to be together.>>> We want to share the last time for us to be together.It is not easy but we will try it!
>>> Correct
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