Where do you prefer staying while on vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
While on vacation I love staying at home.
This vacation I spend lots of time in my room.
When I was young I used to go grandmother’s house.
She lives near by my house so i can go her home easily.
But nowdays because of corona i didn’t go often.
강사 첨삭
Good day Su [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I see the passion in you to learn more in English. Keep up and reach your goal :)
~Teacher Aki :)
~Teacher Aki :)
While on vacation I love staying at home.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I love staying at home during vacation.
This vacation I spend lots of time in my room.
This vacation I spend lots of time in my room.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> This recent summer vacation, I spend most of my time in my room.
When I was young I used to go grandmother’s house.>>> When I was young, I used to go to my grandmother\'s house.
She lives near by my house so i can go her home easily.>>>She lives near my house so I can go to her house easily
>>> She lives nearby. So I can go to her house easily.
But nowdays because of corona i didn’t go often>>> But nowadays, because of coronavirus I don\'t go there often.
>>> But nowadays, because of the pandemic, I don\'t go there often.
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