Where do you prefer to live for the rest of your life, in the countryside or in the city?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a really difficult selection.
Countryside and city have a different advantage.
I live city in Korea and live countryside in Australia.
City have a good facilities and countryside have a beautiful nature.
If It\'s the possible, I want to live in countryside when I was young.
and I will be an elder, I want to live in city.
I have a power and youth, it\'s not hard to live in countryside.
But when I\'m old, it\' not easy to live in countryside.
Sometime, I really miss the milky way when I stayed the Australia.
In Korea, city and countryside have a big disparity.
So it\'t not easy to pick living in countryside.
To sum up, I want to live in countryside but I can\'t. : (
강사 첨삭
Hello Simon! Thank you for sharing another of your views about living in the countryside and city. Indeed, you are right. There are really big differences of living in the city and in the countryside. I also think it depends on the situations and on the person\'s preferences. See you tomorrow! :)
Countryside and city have a different advantage.
>>CORRECT
I live city in Korea and live countryside in Australia.
>>I live in a city in Korea and lived in a countryside in Australia.
City have a good facilities and countryside have a beautiful nature.
>>City has good facilities and countryside has a beautiful nature.
I have a power and youth, it\'s not hard to live in countryside.
>>I have powers and youthfulness, then it\'s not hard to live in the countryside.
But when I\'m old, it\' not easy to live in countryside.
>>But when I\'m old, it\'s not easy to live in the countryside.
Sometime, I really miss the milky way when I stayed the Australia.
>>Sometimes, I really miss the milky way when I stayed in Australia.
In Korea, city and countryside have a big disparity.
>>In Korea, living in the city and in the countryside have a big disparity.
So it\'t not easy to pick living in countryside.
>>So, it\'s not easy to pick living in the countryside.
To sum up, I want to live in countryside but I can\'t. : (
~Teacher Sheila
It\'s a really difficult selection.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
OR>>It\'s a really difficult choices.
OR>>It\'s really difficult to choose.
Countryside and city have a different advantage.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Living in the countryside and the city have different advantages.
I live city in Korea and live countryside in Australia.
>>I live in a city in Korea and lived in a countryside in Australia.
City have a good facilities and countryside have a beautiful nature.
>>City has good facilities and countryside has a beautiful nature.
>>The city has good facilities and the countryside has beautiful surroundings.
If It\'s the possible, I want to live in countryside when I was young.
>>If it was possible, I wanted to live in the countryside when I was young.
>>If it was possible, I wanted to live in the countryside when I was young.
and I will be an elder, I want to live in city.
>>and If I get old, I want to live in the city.
>>and If I get old, I want to live in the city.
I have a power and youth, it\'s not hard to live in countryside.
>>I have powers and youthfulness, then it\'s not hard to live in the countryside.
OR>>I am strong and young, it will not be hard for me to live in the countryside.
But when I\'m old, it\' not easy to live in countryside.
>>But when I\'m old, it\'s not easy to live in the countryside.
OR>>But when I\'m old, it will not be easy for me to live in the countryside.
Sometime, I really miss the milky way when I stayed the Australia.
>>Sometimes, I really miss the milky way when I stayed in Australia.
OR>>Sometimes, I really miss seeing the milky way when I stayed in Australia.
In Korea, city and countryside have a big disparity.
>>In Korea, living in the city and in the countryside have a big disparity.
So it\'t not easy to pick living in countryside.
>>So, it\'s not easy to pick living in the countryside.
OR>>So, it\'s not easy to choose to live in the countryside.
To sum up, I want to live in countryside but I can\'t. : (
>>To sum up, I want to live in the countryside but I can\'t.
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