Where do you prefer to live for the rest of your life, in the countryside or in the city?
학생이 쓴 원문
I plan to live for the rest of my life in the countryside. I will move my house not apartment. I want a small garden with bench to drink morning coffee with my family. If I change it, I will have a good health more than now.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I hope you will achieve your plans in the near future. ^-^
Until the next one! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
I will move my house not apartment.
>>I will move to a house and not an apartment.
I want a small garden with bench to drink morning coffee with my family.
>>I want a small garden with a bench to drink coffee in the morning with my family.
If I change it, I will have a good health more than now.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If I change it, I will be more healthy than now.
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