Where do you prefer to live for the rest of your life, in the countryside or in the city?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hello there~
I introduce Gwang an bridge. Another name is Diamond bridge.
I assure this bridge is South Korea\'s prettiest bridge.
I will show you YouTube address.
This video is in the daytime.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRbY2VvnmeQ
This video is in the nighttime.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=npIb4WU0S1s
Homework: Where do you prefer to live for the rest of your life, in the countryside or in the city?
If i live countryside, i will go to the city when the weekend comes.
If i live in the city, i will go to the countryside when the weekend comes.
Because life need a change of mood.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Thank you for providing more information about Gwang an Bridge or Diamond Bridge that is in Busan, South Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I will tell you about Gwang an Bridge which is also called Diamond Bridge.
I assure this bridge is South Korea\'s prettiest bridge.
>>I am sure this bridge is South Korea\'s prettiest bridge.
OR>>I assure you that this bridge is South Korea\'s prettiest bridge.
I will show you YouTube address.
>>I will show you the YouTube address.
>>I will show you the YouTube address.
This video is in the daytime.
>>CORRECT
This video is in the nighttime.
>>CORRECT
If i live countryside, i will go to the city when the weekend comes.
>>If I\'m living in the countryside, I will go to the city when the weekend comes.
If i live in the city, i will go to the countryside when the weekend comes.
>>If I\'m living in the city, I will go to the countryside when the weekend comes.
Because life need a change of mood.
>>Because life needs a change of mood.
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