Where do you see your self in 5 years?

2021-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Let me be honest with you. I\'m very passionate about this major. I want to find out the branch which I\'m interested in, studying in abroad. If I can do it, I can see myself working in a enterprise about my major. In the company, I want to learn this field. The program will be my one-way ticket to reach my goal and aspirations. After 5 years, I will be walking the load to be an expert. For this future, I need to study widely in this experience. I do know that this experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions in my future. * Is the lengths proper?

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for letting me check your homework.  I love the way you answer the question.  Nice! ^^ Kindly read the corrections as well. :)


-T. Maine


Let me be honest with you. I\'m very passionate about this major.

>>Correct.
 I want to find out the branch which I\'m interested in, studying in abroad.

>>I want to find out which branch of study I am truly  interested  when I study abroad.
 If I can do it, I can see myself working in a enterprise about my major.

>>If I can do it, I can see myself working in an enterprise with my chosen major.
 In the company, I want to learn this field.

>>In the company where I am going to work, I want to improve my skills and knowledge.
 The program will be my one-way ticket to reach my goal and aspirations.

>>This program will be my one-way ticket to reach my goal and aspirations.
 After 5 years, I will be walking the load to be an expert.

>>After 5 years, I think I will be walking the road to be an expert.
 For this future, I need to study widely in this experience.

>>For my future, I need to broaden my study and experience.
 I do know that this experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions in my future.

>>I know that this experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions for my future.



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