Where do you see your self in 5 years?
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Let me be honest with you. I\'m very passionate about this major.
>>Correct.
I want to find out the branch which I\'m interested in, studying in abroad.
>>I want to find out which branch of study I am truly interested when I study abroad.
If I can do it, I can see myself working in a enterprise about my major.
>>If I can do it, I can see myself working in an enterprise with my chosen major.
In the company, I want to learn this field.
>>In the company where I am going to work, I want to improve my skills and knowledge.
The program will be my one-way ticket to reach my goal and aspirations.
>>This program will be my one-way ticket to reach my goal and aspirations.
After 5 years, I will be walking the load to be an expert.
>>After 5 years, I think I will be walking the road to be an expert.
For this future, I need to study widely in this experience.
>>For my future, I need to broaden my study and experience.
I do know that this experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions in my future.
>>I know that this experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions for my future.
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