Where do you see yourself in 10 years? What are your long-term plans? What do you plan to do in a sp
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Wow, I haven\'t thought about that question lately. It seems like when I was young, I had a lot of plans and thoughts about my dream. Anyway, I have a couple of plans in mechanic\'s career. First, I will get a certificate of FAA. It stands for Federal Aviation Administration. If I get this one, I need to have two and a half years of work experience. And another plan I\'ve had is work aboard in U.S.A or France. It\'s because there are manufactures of airplane like Boeing and Airbus.
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Thank you for sharing about your plans in life and your career, Elic! You should be happy because you have created great looking sentences. Be careful with the starting your sentences. Remember that you have to finish the \"thought\" or meaning of the first sentence before moving on and creating another one. But still, you did very well, Elic! Keep up the good work! :)
Wow, I haven\'t thought about that question lately.
Wow, I haven\'t thought about that question lately.
>> Wow! I haven\'t thought about that question so far.
It seems like when I was young, I had a lot of plans and thoughts about my dream.
>> When I was younger, I thought about my dreams more.
Anyway, I have a couple of plans in mechanic\'s career.
>> For now, I have a couple of plans in my career as a mechanic.
First, I will get a certificate of FAA. It stands for Federal Aviation Administration.
>> First, I plan to get certified by the Federal Aviation Administration (FAA).
If I get this one, I need to have two and a half years of work experience.
>> If I will get this certification, I need to have two and a half years of work experience.
And another plan I\'ve had is work aboard in U.S.A or France.
>> Another plan I have is to work abroad, preferably in the U.S.A. or France.
It\'s because there are manufactures of airplane like Boeing and Airbus.
>> This is because there are a lot of airplane manufacturers there, like Boeing and Airbus.
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