Where do you see yourself when you are 70 years old?

2018-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

I’m living in Korea. You never no our future life. But My husband and I made planning for future life. Maybe 9 years later I might be in the US which is CA area. Because distance is not to far compared in Georgia By the time my grand children going to kindergarten or elementary school. I will good take care of them, also traveling together, playing together. Most of my last big dream,that I study hard also exercise by daily. When I am getting older I knew that health is the most valuable things. I love my extended family lucky to have great relationships. I ‘m praying 5times a day. In the morning, in the evening also during the 3 times meal. God is good. I’m blessing .

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]nah!


I am very happy that you are answering your homework. T[이름]k you very much! Every day I\'m getting to know more about you.

You are really blessed because you are always praying and you are a loving person.

See you later. ^^


-Teacher Shelly-



I’m living in Korea.

>>> I\'m now living in Korea.

You never no our future life.

>>> You never know what your future will be.

But My husband and I made planning for future life.

>>> My husband and I are planning for our life in the future.
 Maybe 9 years later I might be in the US which is CA area.

>>> Maybe 9 years from now, I might be in the U.S. particularly in the area of CA.
 Because distance is not to far compared in Georgia

>>> The distance is not that far compared to Georgia.
 By the time my grand children going to kindergarten or elementary school.

>>> By that time my grandchildren would be in the kindergarten of elementary school.
 I will good take care of them, also traveling together, playing together.

>>> I will take good care of them, we will travel together and play.
 Most of my last big dream,that I study hard also exercise by daily.

>>> My biggest dream is to study hard and exercise daily.
 When I am getting older I knew that health is the most valuable things.

>>> As I get older I know that being healthy is the most valuable thing to do.

 I love my extended family lucky to have great relationships.

>>> I love my extended family, I\'m lucky to have a good relationship with them.
 I ‘m praying 5times a day.

>>> Correct!

In the morning, in the evening also during the 3 times meal.

>>>In the morning, evening, and before meals.
 God is good. I’m blessing .

>>>God is good! I\'m so blessed.



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