Where do you see yourself when you are 70 years old?
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I am very happy that you are answering your homework. T[이름]k you very much! Every day I\'m getting to know more about you.
You are really blessed because you are always praying and you are a loving person.
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-Teacher Shelly-
I’m living in Korea.
>>> I\'m now living in Korea.
You never no our future life.
>>> You never know what your future will be.
But My husband and I made planning for future life.
>>> My husband and I are planning for our life in the future.
Maybe 9 years later I might be in the US which is CA area.
>>> Maybe 9 years from now, I might be in the U.S. particularly in the area of CA.
Because distance is not to far compared in Georgia
>>> The distance is not that far compared to Georgia.
By the time my grand children going to kindergarten or elementary school.
>>> By that time my grandchildren would be in the kindergarten of elementary school.
I will good take care of them, also traveling together, playing together.
>>> I will take good care of them, we will travel together and play.
Most of my last big dream,that I study hard also exercise by daily.
>>> My biggest dream is to study hard and exercise daily.
When I am getting older I knew that health is the most valuable things.
>>> As I get older I know that being healthy is the most valuable thing to do.
I love my extended family lucky to have great relationships.
>>> I love my extended family, I\'m lucky to have a good relationship with them.
I ‘m praying 5times a day.
>>> Correct!
In the morning, in the evening also during the 3 times meal.
>>>In the morning, evening, and before meals.
God is good. I’m blessing .
>>>God is good! I\'m so blessed.
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