Where do you think is the best playground in the world?Why?
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I think the best playground is my friends playground because it is very excitin.
So my friends playground very good.
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Where do you think is the best playground in the world?Why?
I think the best playground is my friends playground because it is very excitin.
So my friends playground very good.
>>> I think my friend\'s playground is the best because it is very exciting. My friend\'s playground is really great!
>>> OR: My friend\'s playground is amazing! It\'s the most exciting one I\'ve been to.
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