Where do you think is the cheapest shopping malls in Seoul? Or offers discounts?
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I think Dongmyo Traditional Market is the cheapest shopping malls.
This is because the Dongmyo market is a traditional market, so they are cheaper than other malls.
In Korea, there were a lot of traditional markets, but these days most of those are disappearing.
People usually prefer a comfortable place to shop rather than a cheap shopping mall.
That\'s why many traditional markets are fading away now.
However, I think we can enjoy more reasonable shopping in the traditional markets.
We can buy cheaper than any other market, and also we can feel their special atmosphere.
I strongly recommend you to go to the Dongmyo Traditional Market.
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Hello Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I think Dongmyo Traditional Market is the cheapest shopping malls. This is because the Dongmyo market is a traditional market, so they are cheaper than other malls.
>>I think Dongmyo Traditional Market is the cheapest shopping mall. This is because the Dongmyo market is a traditional market, so they are cheaper than other malls.
In Korea, there were a lot of traditional markets, but these days most of those are disappearing. People usually prefer a comfortable place to shop rather than a cheap shopping mall.
>>Correct!
That\'s why many traditional markets are fading away now. However, I think we can enjoy more reasonable shopping in the traditional markets.
>>Correct!
We can buy cheaper than any other market, and also we can feel their special atmosphere. I strongly recommend you to go to the Dongmyo Traditional Market.
>>Correct!
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