Where do you think is the most dangerous place to go on a trip? Why?
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I think the most dangerous place is Russia, Middle Eastern countries and Somalia.
Because some countries are at war, some countries are not safe.
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Here\'s another edited composition for you, Yale!
Check out the small revisions, such as commas or the usage of other expressions, and take a look at how I reversed the order of the second sentence. Anyway, have a good one!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Where do you think is the most dangerous place to go on a trip? Why?
I think the most dangerous place is Russia, Middle Eastern countries and Somalia.
>> I think the most dangerous places are Russia, Middle Eastern countries, and Somalia.
Because some countries are at war, some countries are not safe.
>> OR: Some countries are unsafe and not peaceful because others are at war.
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