Where do you think is the perfect place to hide from all the stress in this world?

2014-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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There is no place to hide from all the stress in this world. Because everything only is in the mind. Having a lot of work to do causes stress. so, we do the proper things. we know for the first time to hide from all the stress there. To my teacher Kathrine. thank you for encouraging me. i want to come up to your expectation. and i want to get along with foreign friends. i study hard to speaking english. and i commite your comment. see you ~ and good luck!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Well, whatever you do and wherever you go when you are stress out, make sure that you are enjoying so that you could relieve your stress.

And I know that you are doing your best to study English so that you could develop your English skills.

So keep it up and I know you will become a good English speaker someday.

Talk to you soon!

You take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


There is no place to hide from all the stress in this world.

>>  correct!

Because everything only is in the mind.

>>  Because everything is only in the mind.

Having a lot of work to do causes stress.

>> Having a lot of work causes our stress.

so, we do the proper things.

>>  So we have to do the proper things.

we know for the first time to hide from all the stress there.
>> At first, what we know is to hide from all the stress.
To my teacher Kathrine.

>>  correct! 
 thank you for encouraging me.

>>  correct!

i want to come up to your expectation. 

>>  correct! 
 and i want to get along with foreign friends.

>>  correct! 
 i study hard to speaking english.

>>  I will study hard to be able to speak in English.

and i commite your comment.

>>  And I will commit to your comments.
 see you ~ and good luck!!

>>  correct! 

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