Where do you think is the perfect place to hide from all the stress in this world?
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Well, whatever you do and wherever you go when you are stress out, make sure that you are enjoying so that you could relieve your stress.
And I know that you are doing your best to study English so that you could develop your English skills.
So keep it up and I know you will become a good English speaker someday.
Talk to you soon!
You take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
There is no place to hide from all the stress in this world.
>> correct!
Because everything only is in the mind.
>> Because everything is only in the mind.
Having a lot of work to do causes stress.
>> Having a lot of work causes our stress.
so, we do the proper things.
>> So we have to do the proper things.
we know for the first time to hide from all the stress there.
>> At first, what we know is to hide from all the stress.
To my teacher Kathrine.
>> correct!
thank you for encouraging me.
>> correct!
i want to come up to your expectation.
>> correct!
and i want to get along with foreign friends.
>> correct!
i study hard to speaking english.
>> I will study hard to be able to speak in English.
and i commite your comment.
>> And I will commit to your comments.
see you ~ and good luck!!
>> correct!
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