Where do you usually buy things that you need? Do you prefer going to the department store or shoppi
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Hello Kate. Thank you once again for this. I heard, delivery system in Korea is fast and convenient. No wonder most people would prefer online shopping. :)
- T. Beth
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I buy the things I need mainly online.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I mainly buy things I need online.
>>> OR: I mostly buy things I need online.
>>> OR: I shop online for things I need.
There are too many people in large marts and department, so I am tired.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: There are too many people in large marts and department stores so I end up getting tired.
I hate the delay.
>>> CORRECT.
Online shopping is quick and accurate.
>>> CORRECT.
I don\'t have to carry heavy objects.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: On top of that, I don\'t have to carry heavy objects.
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