Where do you usually buy your clothes? How often do you buy new clothes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know exactly where my mom usually buy my clothes and I don\'t often buy new clothes but..... I want to buy new clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Try splitting your ideas in different sentences.
This was your writing style before the break.
You have to be consistent with your other compositions.
They would serve you a lot better.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t know exactly where my mom usually buy my clothes and I don\'t often buy new clothes but..... I want to buy new clothes.
>> I don\'t know exactly where my mom usually buys my clothes and I don\'t often buy new clothes but I want to buy new clothes.
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