Where do you usually buy your clothes? How often do you buy new clothes?
학생이 쓴 원문
In these days, I buy my clothes on internet, because I don\'t have much time to do.
If they don\"t suit me, I can return in time, even though I rarely pay for some money.
I like purchasing the clothes during the sale, and then I am satisfied with reasonable price.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
In these days, I buy my clothes on internet, because I don\'t have much time to do.
>> These days, I buy my clothes online because I don\'t have enough time to go shopping.
If they don\"t suit me, I can return in time, even though I rarely pay for some money.
If they don\"t suit me, I can return in time, even though I rarely pay for some money.
>> If they don\'t suit me, I can return them immediately usually with no extra pay.
I like purchasing the clothes during the sale, and then I am satisfied with reasonable price.
I like purchasing the clothes during the sale, and then I am satisfied with reasonable price.
>> I like purchasing clothes on sale and I\'m satisfied with those reasonable prices.
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