where do you usually find your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually find my friends in reading circles.
But I don\'t especially try to make a lot of friends.
Because friendship has to be made natually through an aquaintance.
I think quality of friendship is more important the number of friends.
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Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for your homework!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
where do you usually find your friends?
I usually find my friends in reading circles.
>>I usually find my friends within my reading club circle.
But I don\'t especially try to make a lot of friends.
But I don\'t especially try to make a lot of friends.
CORRECT!
or>>However, I don\'t make a special effort to try and make a lot of friends.
Because friendship has to be made natually through an aquaintance.
Because friendship has to be made natually through an aquaintance.
>>Because, a friendship has to be made naturally through an acquaintance.
I think quality of friendship is more important the number of friends.
I think quality of friendship is more important the number of friends.
>>I think the quality of a friendship is more important than the number of friends.
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