Where do you usually get your news from?
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I don\'t have a TV at home.Because kids always want to watch TV.I think watching TV much too will affect kids vision and brain development.So I usually get news from mobile phone and friends.I will go to NAVER and GOOGLE\'s websites ever day to read some news.And get some information from chatting with friends.
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Hi Mia!
We have a television, but we don\'t often use it because we often use our smart phones.
Having a smart phone is pretty convenient :)
Thank you for sharing your answer.
I don\'t have a TV at home.
>>> CORRECT!
Because kids always want to watch TV.
>>> CORRECT!
I think watching TV much too will affect kids vision and brain development.
>>> I think watching TV a lot will affect children\'s vision and brain development.
So I usually get news from mobile phone and friends.
>>> CORRECT!
I will go to NAVER and GOOGLE\'s websites ever day to read some news.
>>> I will go to Naver and Google\'s website every day and read the news.
And get some information from chatting with friends.
>>> And get information from chatting with friends.
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