Where do you usually go for lunch?
학생이 쓴 원문
I recently moved to Bucheon. I\'m so sad I left my favorite restaurants in Incheon.
There are so many, many different kinds of restaurants, some of which I love but now less chance to go to.
and the first one I really bring here with me is a \'Mandoo\' place, which has 3 kinds of Mandoo foods and other kinds.
Their dishes are all good and I\'ve tried almost all dishes down and a few ones to go, it\'s a shame.
Anyway, the second one is a snack cart one block across from the Gyeyang gu office.
They are a typical snack cart that has 떡볶이, 순대, 튀김 and 어묵, things like that.
I found that the two restaurants have a thing in common, which leads me there time and again.
The best thing I found there is their minds how they consider their own business and customers.
Besides, it seems they try to stay as clean as they can and they always give more than is ordered to us, especially to their regular customers.
Aside from the two reasons, their dishes are all good enough to spend time and money on.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ki,
Thank you so much for your ideas today.
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY.
I recently moved to Bucheon. CORRECT!
or>>I just moved to Bucheon very recently.
I\'m so sad I left my favorite restaurants in Incheon.
CORRECT!
or>>I feel sorrowful since I left all my favorite restaurants in Incheon.
There are so many, many different kinds of restaurants, some of which I love but now less chance to go to.
There are so many, many different kinds of restaurants, some of which I love but now less chance to go to.
CORRECT!
or>>There are multiple varieties of restaurants, some of which I adore, but I now have less chance to visit.
and the first one I really bring here with me is a \'Mandoo\' place, which has 3 kinds of Mandoo foods and other kinds.
and the first one I really bring here with me is a \'Mandoo\' place, which has 3 kinds of Mandoo foods and other kinds.
>>And the first one I really remember fondly, since I\'m here, is a \'Mandoo\' place, which has 3 kinds of this dish. Plus, there are also other kinds of foods.
Their dishes are all good and I\'ve tried almost all dishes down and a few ones to go, it\'s a shame.
>>Their dishes are all good and I\'ve tried almost all of them down and a few ones more to go. So it\'s a shame.
Anyway, the second one is a snack cart one block across from the Gyeyang gu office.>>Anyway, the second one is a snack cart which is one block across from the Gyeyang gu office.
They are a typical snack cart that has 떡볶이, 순대, 튀김 and 어묵, things like that.
They are a typical snack cart that has 떡볶이, 순대, 튀김 and 어묵, things like that.
CORRECT!
or>>They look just like a usual snack cart that has 떡볶이, 순대, 튀김 and 어묵, etc.
I found that the two restaurants have a thing in common, which leads me there time and again.
I found that the two restaurants have a thing in common, which leads me there time and again.
>>I found that the two restaurants have a thing in common, which has led me there time and again.
The best thing I found there is their minds how they consider their own business and customers.
The best thing I found there is their minds how they consider their own business and customers.
>>The best thing I liked about them is their sincerity. The way they consider their own customers and the way they take good care of the business.
Besides, it seems they try to stay as clean as they can and they always give more than is ordered to us, especially to their regular customers.
Besides, it seems they try to stay as clean as they can and they always give more than is ordered to us, especially to their regular customers.
>>Besides, it seems to me that they try to be as clean as they can and they always give more than their customers have ordered, especially, to their regular patrons.
Aside from the two reasons, their dishes are all good enough to spend time and money on.
Aside from the two reasons, their dishes are all good enough to spend time and money on.
>>Aside from these two reasons, their dishes are all good enough for me to spend my money on, including my time.
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