Where do you usually go with your friends or family during the weekend?

2012-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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During the week days, I usually stay in Osan-city alone because of my work. So I usually go back to Seoul on Friday after work to spend time with my family and my friends. However, each of we are usually busy, so I prefer to arrange our time to meet to prevent to waste of time or unnecessary arguments. Most of time, I have a three and a half hour - Chinese class in Saturday morning, after class, I have a lunch with classmate near the centeral down town. Because it's very conveinient to go any place from there and I love to eat some cuisine which I only can enjoy in Seoul, so I usually get home very late. Sunday is only one time in a week I allow myself to sleep late. However, once in a month, I go on a trip with our travelling group. Except that case, I usually go to library near my house to borrow some books. Or I like to spend time for reading, cooking and baking. Sometimes I feel lazy to stay on a bed all day, but soon realize it I wasted my precious time.

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I\'m glad you managed to squeeze in some time to do your homework. I really enjoyed reading your composition. I have a few suggestions on some of your sentences. Overall though, you did a good job. ^^   During the week days, I usually stay in Osan-city alone because of my work. >>During the weekdays, I usually stay in Osan City alone because of my work.So I usually go back to Seoul on Friday after work to spend time with my family and my friends. >>Correct!However, each of we are usually busy, so I prefer to arrange our time to meet to prevent to waste of time or unnecessary arguments. >>However, each of us are usually busy, so I plan to arrange our schedules to meet up to prevent wasting time or unnecessary arguments.Most of time, I have a three and a half hour - Chinese class in Saturday morning, after class, I have a lunch with classmate near the centeral down town. >>Most of the time, I have a three and a half hours Chinese class every Saturday morning. After class, I have lunch with my classmate near the central downtown.Because it\'s very conveinient to go any place from there and I love to eat some cuisine which I only can enjoy in Seoul, so I usually get home very late. >>Correct!Sunday is only one time in a week I allow myself to sleep late. >>Sunday comes once a week only so I allow myself to sleep late.However, once in a month, I go on a trip with our travelling group. >>Correct!Except that case, I usually go to library near my house to borrow some books. >>Except that case, I usually go to the library near my house to borrow some books.Or I like to spend time for reading, cooking and baking. >>Correct!Sometimes I feel lazy to stay on a bed all day, but soon realize it I wasted my precious time. >>Sometimes I feel lazy to stay on a bed all day, but soon realize I\'m wasting my precious time.  

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