Where do you usually look for other people?

2020-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I usually look for my friend at a cafe such as starbucks. I used to promise them where we meet. And they often go to there. At that place, there is a relax atmosphere for us. Most people do something there such as studying, listening, or chatting with someone. I often used to study there until I had a baby. Sometimes we go to there with my baby. But we think my son doesn\'t like there. When we arrived there, he was very cyring...ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this.

- T. Beth

I usually look for my friend at a cafe such as starbucks.

>>> I usually look for my friend in a cafe such as Starbucks.

I used to promise them where we meet. And they often go to there.

>>> OR: I used to tell them where we would meet and they often go there.

At that place, there is a relax atmosphere for us.

>>> In that place, there is a relaxed atmosphere for us.
Most people do something there such as studying, listening, or chatting with someone.

>>> correct
I often used to study there until I had a baby.

>>> correct
Sometimes we go to there with my baby.

>>> correct.

>>> OR: We sometimes got there with my abby.

But we think my son doesn\'t like there.

>>> But we think my son doesn\'t like it there.

When we arrived there, he was very cyring..

>>> When we arrived there, he would always cry.

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