Where do you usually meet new people?

2021-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I can meet new people at academic seminars, diverse training programs and my daughter\'s parent associations. Sometimes I feel nervous and excited. To meet new people is another vitality in my life/ I am taking precaution not to fall into helplessness and mannerism.

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Hi [이름],
Thank you for today\'s ideas!
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
Where do you usually meet new people?
I can meet new people at academic seminars, diverse training programs and my daughter\'s parent associations.
>>I can meet new people at some of the academic seminars. Because they have diverse training programs. And I can also go to my daughter\'s school\'s parents associations.
Sometimes, I feel nervous and excited.
CORRECT!
or>>Sometimes, I get nervous and very excited.
To meet new people is another vitality in my life/
>>Meeting new people adds some vitality into my life.
I am taking precaution not to fall into helplessness and mannerism.
>>I am taking some precautions so as not to fall into helplessly doing a lot of mannerisms.


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