Where do you usually meet new people?

2023-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I usually meet new people in the school. School teacher in korea change schools every five years. Now I have been working at this school for four years, So I move school in 2025 years! Meet new people always nervous and interesting! I believe I can do it well!!

강사 첨삭

Good day, Angela!
Meeting new people and beco[이름]g friends is a healthy cycle. 
Give aourself a chance to enjoy every open doors of friendship :)
Aki~


I usually meet new people in the school.
>>> I usually meet new people in School.

School teacher in korea change schools every five years.
>> School teachers in Korea change schools every five years.

Now I have been working at this school for four years, So I move school in 2025 years!
>>> Now I have been working at this school for four years, So I will be moving to a new school  in 2025th

Meet new people always nervous and interesting!
>>> CORRECT!

I believe I can do it well!!
>>> CORRECT!

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