Where do you want to be in right now?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can, I want to go to the Pacific islands.
I want to enjoy the sunset there and read books while listening to music.
As I got older, I became like to more medidating quietly than seeing new countries.
I am foucing on human\'s life than artificial culture.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for today\'s ideas!
Have a nice day and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
Where do you want to be in right now?
If I can, I want to go to the Pacific islands.
CORRECT!
or>>If I have the ability, I would like to travel to the Pacific islands.
I want to enjoy the sunset there and read books while listening to music.
I want to enjoy the sunset there and read books while listening to music.
CORRECT!
or>>I hope to enjoy the sunset, while reading books and listening to music.
As I got older, I became like to more medidating quietly than seeing new countries.
As I got older, I became like to more medidating quietly than seeing new countries.
>>As I got older, I did more meditations than going to new countries.
I am foucing on human\'s life than artificial culture.
I am foucing on human\'s life than artificial culture.
>>I am focusing more on a human\'s life rather than on the artificial cultures.
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