Where do you want to be seated in a restaurant, a smoking or a non-smoking area?
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I want non-smoking zone. because I didn\'t smoke and i won\'t in future.
Smoke is so bad to health and has so many bad substances.
In korea, Almost area is Non-smoking area.
Increasing non-smoking area is so good policy.
And increasing price of the smoke is so important thing that reduce the people who smoke.
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Hi, [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I want non-smoking zone. because I didn\'t smoke and i won\'t in future.
>> I want a non-smoking zone because I don\'t smoke and won\'t in the future.
Smoke is so bad to health and has so many bad substances.
>> Correct
In korea, Almost area is Non-smoking area.
>> In Korea, almost every area is a non-smoking area.
Increasing non-smoking area is so good policy.
>> Increasing the non-smoking area is such a good policy.
And increasing price of the smoke is so important thing that reduce the people who smoke.
>> Increasing the price of cigarettes is an important measure to reduce the number of people who smoke.
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