Where do you want to go right now?

2017-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Honestly, If I can leave right now, I don't care where it is. My wife and I couldn't go nowhere since we gave a birth to my baby. So, we are very sick and tired of currently days. And I want to show some another scnenery to my baby as well. So, If I can go somewhere right now without any concern, I'd like to go to resort which is around a beautiful beach.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing me your ideas about this topic.

We have the same thing in mind. :D

I would want to a beautiful place far from the busyness of the city. 

It would be a wonderful time to just sit and have a peaceful time not worrying about anything. :)

I hope we could do it anytime we want., :D


See you! ^^


Teacher Glenda   



Honestly, If I can leave right now, I don\'t care where it is. 

>> Correct

or

>>> Honestly, If I can leave Korea right now, I don\'t mind what place to go.
 My wife and I couldn\'t go nowhere since we gave a birth to my baby. 

>> My wife and I couldn\'t go nowhere since she gave birth to my baby. 
 So, we are very sick and tired of currently days.

>> So, we are very sick and tired these days.
 And I want to show some another scnenery to my baby as well. 

>> And I want to show other sceneries or places to my baby.
 So, If I can go somewhere right now without any concern, I\'d like to go
to resort which is around a beautiful beach.

>>  So, If I can go somewhere right now without any concern, I\'d like to go
to a resort which is around a beautiful beach.

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