Where do you want to go right now?
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing me your ideas about this topic.
We have the same thing in mind. :D
I would want to a beautiful place far from the busyness of the city.
It would be a wonderful time to just sit and have a peaceful time not worrying about anything. :)
I hope we could do it anytime we want., :D
See you! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Honestly, If I can leave right now, I don\'t care where it is.
>> Correct
or
>>> Honestly, If I can leave Korea right now, I don\'t mind what place to go.
My wife and I couldn\'t go nowhere since we gave a birth to my baby.
>> My wife and I couldn\'t go nowhere since she gave birth to my baby.
So, we are very sick and tired of currently days.
>> So, we are very sick and tired these days.
And I want to show some another scnenery to my baby as well.
>> And I want to show other sceneries or places to my baby.
So, If I can go somewhere right now without any concern, I\'d like to go
to resort which is around a beautiful beach.
>> So, If I can go somewhere right now without any concern, I\'d like to go
to a resort which is around a beautiful beach.
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