Where do you want to go while you still have days left for this winter vacation? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My memories of the Busan are always good.
My family regularly used to visit Busan for enjoy a vacation.
Especially I like to see the waving sea of Busan in winter.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Julia! Excellent job for doing your homework. Practice the art of writing in English because this is one way of developing your skill :) Have fun learning. Take care!
T. Aki ~
My memories of the Busan are always good.
>>> My memories in Busan are always good.
My family regularly used to visit Busan for enjoy a vacation.
>>> My family used to regularly visit Busan to enjoy our vacation.
>>> My family used to regularly visit Busan for vacation.
Especially I like to see the waving sea of Busan in winter.
>>> I especially like to see the waving sea of Busan in winter.
>>> I especially like to see the waves of Busan\'s sea in winter.
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