Where do you want to live if given the chance?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Whopper! Thank you for the effort of sending this in. It is indeed a dog-eat-dog society in Korea, as what I heard from most of my students there. That is why a lot of Korean choose to immigrate to another country. I wish you luck on that.
- T. Beth
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I learn English Because I want to go to a wider world.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I\'m learning English because I want to expand my horizon.
I am living with competition in Korea.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I am living under great competition in Korea.
Korea is narrow. So people compete again and again.
>>> Korea is a small country so people keep competing against each other.
I was tired, I want to live relexed.
>>> I am tired, I want to live a relaxed life.
If I have a chance, I\'m going to live in Canada.
>>> CORRECT.
>> OR: If I get the chance, I want to live in Canada.
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