Where do you want to live if given the chance?

2019-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I learn English Because I want to go to a wider world. I am living with competition in Korea. Korea is narrow. So people compete again and again. I was tired, I want to live relexed. If I have a chance, I\'m going to live in Canada.

강사 첨삭

Hello Whopper! Thank you for the effort of sending this in. It is indeed a dog-eat-dog society in Korea, as what I heard from most of my students there. That is why a lot of Korean choose to immigrate to another country. I wish you luck on that.

- T. Beth

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I learn English Because I want to go to a wider world.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: I\'m learning English because I want to expand my horizon.     
 I am living with competition in Korea. 

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: I am living under great competition in Korea.
 Korea is narrow. So people compete again and again.

>>> Korea is a small country so people keep competing against each other.
 I was tired, I want to live relexed.

>>> I am tired, I want to live a relaxed life.
 If I have a chance, I\'m going to live in Canada.

>>> CORRECT.

>> OR: If I get the chance, I want to live in Canada.

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