Where do you wish to live when you are old?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I am old, I want to comback my hometown.
and then I want to talk with my close friends and be happy.
And I want to live in a house with a large yard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. [이름]tina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
When I am old, I want to comback my hometown.
>> When I am old, I want to go back to my hometown.
and then I want to talk with my close friends and be happy.
>> Then I want to talk with my close friends and be happy.
And I want to live in a house with a large yard.
>> I want to live in a house with a large yard.
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