Where do you wish to live when you are old?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I wish to live quiet place when I am old. 

>> I wish to live in a quiet place when I am old. 

I think I will live city which is loud over 10 years. 

>> I think I will live in the city which is loud for over 10 years. 

So when I get old, I will sick of the cities.

>> So when I get old, I will get sick of the cities.