Where do you wish to live when you are old?

2019-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I wish would be in a Iceland because that country has amazing, beautiful land-view, and you would even see an aurora Such an experience is amazing enough to change your life And i hope i would be. And old age means that there is nothing more new to feel. When before we die, we keep stay our life style or escape your boundary like just get up and move without plan My motto is don\'t hesitate, life is short I will choose the latter, I trying to have on mind everyday When i would arrive to Iceland I always would be going to travel, and meet new world that i haven\'t ever seen It\'s like a baby that just came out the world. I\'m looking forward to getting older

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It\'s good to know that you are excited to experience new things when you get older. Nobody really knows what happens in the future but it\'s nice to have an expectation. Enjoy your day!--T.Dee   



I wish would be in a Iceland

>>I wish would be in Iceland.
 because that country has amazing, beautiful land-view, and you would even see an aurora

>>It is because that country has amazing and beautiful views and you would even see an aurora borealis.
Such an experience is amazing enough to change your life And i hope i would be.

>>Such an experience is amazing enough to change your life and i hope it could happen to me.

And old age means that there is nothing more new to feel.

>>CORRECT!
When before we die, we keep stay our life style or escape your boundary like just get up and move without plan

>>Before we die, we could either keep our lifestyle or escape the normal routine like wake up and live without plan.
My motto is don\'t hesitate, life is short

>>My motto is don\'t hesitate because life is short.
I will choose the latter, I trying to have on mind everyday

>>I will choose the latter and I try to have decisions everyday.
 When i would arrive to Iceland I always would be going to travel, and meet new world that i haven\'t ever seen.

>>When would settle to Iceland I would  always be travelling to see parts of the world that i haven\'t seen before.
 It\'s like a baby that just came out the world.

>>CORRECT!
 I\'m looking forward to getting older

 >>I\'m looking forward to getting older.

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