Where do you work out?
학생이 쓴 원문
Before Corona, I worked out at the gym once a week and took physical training by experts.
Now I couldn\'t go there I work out at home instead of at the gym.
So it is difficult to exercise regularly.
However I am trying to exercise 30 minutes a day at least.
Recently international society is infested Myanmar civil war.
The military is trying to dominate the country.
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for today\'s ideas!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
Where do you work out?
Before Corona, I worked out at the gym once a week and took physical training by experts.
>>Before the Coronavirus, I worked out at the gym once a week and took training programs with experts.
Now I couldn\'t go there I work out at home instead of at the gym.
>>Right now, I couldn\'t go there because I work out at home instead of at the gym.
So it is difficult to exercise regularly.CORRECT!
or>>So it is difficult to exercise regularly.
However I am trying to exercise 30 minutes a day at least.
>>However, I am trying to exercise 30 minutes a day, at least.
However I am trying to exercise 30 minutes a day at least.
>>However, I am trying to exercise 30 minutes a day, at least.
or>>However, I am trying to at least exercise 30 minutes a day.
Recently international society is infested Myanmar civil war.
Recently international society is infested Myanmar civil war.
>>Recently, there is an international incident that has started to spread all over the world. It\'s about the Myanmar civil war.
The military is trying to dominate the country.
The military is trying to dominate the country.
CORRECT!
or>>The military is attempting to control the country.
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