Where do young people in this country usually spend their free time?

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Thesedays, young people`s interests was expanded in comparison with past time.

>>These days, young people`s interests expanded in comparison with the past time.

 By the their habit the place to spend time will be differnt.

>>They go to a different place where they can spend their habits.
 To be specific, teenagers flequently visit PC room to play the various games with friends. 

>>To be specific, teenagers frequently visit PC room to play various games with friends. 
 Most of PC room offer the users best services with the latest computers.

>>Most PC rooms offer the users best services with the latest computer.
 in addition, it is possible to have a meal and snacks in the pc room.

>>In addition, it is possible to have a meal and a snack in the PC room.

 This atmosphere helps them to focus on spending time in that place. 

>>This atmosphere helps them to focus spending time in that place. 
 The other way, women often spend time in the down town.

>>The other hand, girls often spend time downtown.
 They who are interested in the beauty and fashions use time to avoid lag behind the trends.

>>They are interested in beauty and fashion to avoid lag behind the trends.
 and, many adults want to join a club that they hope to learn. 

>>And many adults want to join a club hoping to learn new things.
 by joining clubs, they learn that fields and socialize with members.

>>By joining clubs, they learn about a certain field and socialize with the members.