Where else do you like going during summer?
학생이 쓴 원문
The summer is really hot. so, walking away outside is very hard. I prefer to go river and beach. because of cool around the water.
Second, I enjoy that go to the cafe. I like ice coffee in fresh there. I can chat conveniently with my friends. and can easily take a picture.
Therefore, it is good for summer time, I recommend that playing go to the water and go to the inside.
강사 첨삭
Hello Clara!
Thank your for making your homework today! You did really well. See you tomorrow in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>The summer is really hot so walking outside is hard.
2. I prefer to go river and beach. because of cool around the water.
>>I prefer going to the river and beach because the water is cool.
3. Second, I enjoy that go to the cafe.
3. Second, I enjoy that go to the cafe.
>>Second, I enjoy going to the cafe.
4. I like ice coffee in fresh there.
>>I like drinking fresh iced coffee there.
5. I can chat conveniently with my friends. and can easily take a picture.
>>CORRECT!
6.Therefore, it is good for summer time, I recommend that playing go to the water and go to the inside.
6.Therefore, it is good for summer time, I recommend that playing go to the water and go to the inside.
>>Therefore, in summer, I recommend playing in the water or just staying at home.
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