Where I live?

I live in South korea at Sejong.I live in apartment at 10th floor. Sejong is a new city so all of the apartments are new, high and well design. it is a wonderful and spectacular place to ride bikes. Everyday I go out to ride bikes. I have my own room. Now the wheather of korea is getting really cold and I just stay at home. Korea apartment is much better than England house.At England it is really cold.There is also a good things at England because there is a stairs to second floor. WHERE DO YOU LIVE TEACHER MAYLEEN?

Hi there Min!:) Happy Tuesday!   Thank you for making another composition. This time, you talked about where you\'re residing in Korea. I must compliment you because you did a good job with your sentences. I only made few modifications so keep in mind and of course practice constantly.   I live in a small city nestled within a mountain range the city is known for it\'s mild climate owing it to it\'s high elevation. My house is located near a watershed. It is small and only has two rooms.   Again, thank you for taking time to do this. So, I\'ll see you in class, Have a great evening!:)^.^   ~Teacher Mayleen~   I live in South korea at Sejong. >> I live in Sejong, South Korea. I live in apartment at 10th floor. >> I live in an apartment at the 10th floor of our building. Sejong is a new city so all of the apartments are new, high and well design. >> Sejong is a new city so all apartment building are new, tall, and well-designed. it is a wonderful and spectacular place to ride bikes. >> There are wonderful places to ride bikes. Everyday I go out to ride bikes. >> CORRECT OR: I go out everyday to ride my bike. I have my own room. >> CORRECT OR: I already have my own room.Now the wheather of korea is getting really cold and I just stay at home. >> Now the weather in Korea is getting colder so I just stay at home.Korea apartment is much better than England house. >> Our apartment here in Korea is much better than our house in England. At England it is really cold. >> In England, it is really cold. There is also a good things at England because there is a stairs to second floor. >> The good thing in England is that there are stairs heading to the second floor.WHERE DO YOU LIVE TEACHER MAYLEEN? >> CORRECT