where I live

2011-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I live on the 12th floor of 13-story apartment building in east of seoul. And It takes about 30minutes to get to the downtown by subway. There are many restaurants such as VIPS, OUTBACK.. It's very convenient. There are also big supermarkets such as EMART, HOME PLUS,,, It's always clowded with local people. Also, There is han-river park near my house. so I usually go to exercise with my friends. There are many people who exercise.

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Hello, Wow I appreciate you for sending an article about the place that you live in. It sounds really great. Talk to you tomorrow ^^ Teacher Tess  ^------------^   I live on the 12th floor of 13-story apartment building in east of seoul. >> I live in the 12th floor of a 13-storey apartment building in the East of Seoul. And It takes about 30minutes to get to the downtown by subway. >> It takes 30 minutes to get to the downtown by subway. There are many restaurants such as VIPS, OUTBACK.. >> CorrectIt's very convenient. >> CorrectThere are also big supermarkets such as EMART, HOME PLUS,,, >> CorrectIt's always clowded with local people. >> It's always very crowded by local tourists. Also, There is han-river park near my house. so I usually go to exercise with my friends. >> There is also a han-river park near my house, so I usually exercise with my friends. There are many people who exercise. >> There are many people in there who exercise.  

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